Class Critique Week 4

• Think about making it portrait not landscape to help make the figure smaller
• Think about the figure's scale and position on page to make her less dominant
• Consider the background (the footpath is boring)
• Consider casting a different model, someone who looks more homeless etc
• Are there symbolic ways to show this so you don't have to use a figure or flag?
• Consider where the poster could be placed in the environment to help make her small/less dominant e.g. floor, low down on a wall
• Could do a slow shutter speed of people walking past ignoring her (so she is in focus and they are blurred)
• Think about her face: Is she looking at the audience? Where is her gaze leading the viewer? Does her face make it more just about her personally?
• She could look more cold to push the idea e.g. she could be naked/look naked